January 29

[edited in pencil by Schenker: final version given here:]

In Rudorff’s Liedern u. Klavierstücken fehlt es den Motiven an einer Gebundenheit im größeren Style! (vgl. Brahms’ Lieder.) 1

© Transcription Ian Bent.

Friday, January 29

[edited in pencil by Schenker: final version given here:]

In Rudorff's songs and piano pieces, the motives lack a certain coherence in the grander style! (cf. Brahms's songs.) 1

© Translation Ian Bent.

January 29

[edited in pencil by Schenker: final version given here:]

In Rudorff’s Liedern u. Klavierstücken fehlt es den Motiven an einer Gebundenheit im größeren Style! (vgl. Brahms’ Lieder.) 1

© Transcription Ian Bent.

Friday, January 29

[edited in pencil by Schenker: final version given here:]

In Rudorff's songs and piano pieces, the motives lack a certain coherence in the grander style! (cf. Brahms's songs.) 1

© Translation Ian Bent.

Footnotes

1 Original reading in ink: "Rudorff’s Liedern u. Klavierstücken fehlt die Gebundenheit der Motive im größeren Style." ("Rudorff''s songs and piano pieces lack coherence of the motives in the grander style.")